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 This [[Astrali]] walked out as if it was as old as they were, with calculating eyes and metal encircled on its four legs that moved with an almost unnatural movement that did not function as theirs did. [[Asa Mistlight|Asa]] and [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]] were quick to be on their guard when it approached, introducing itself as [[Brutus Odumborn]], The First Artificial [[Astrali]].
-Most of [[Hypselle Aster|Hypselle's]] siblings were shocked and angered at the quick knowledge and language this supposed 'sibling' already had, when all of them and the generations following them had to spend significant time learning how to live and speak. [[Hallias Yeneri|Hallias]] was the most outspoken against this intruder, however both [[Hypselle Aster|Hypselle]] and [[Wiley Marius|Wiley]] were sympathetic to the new arrival. They believed that if their mother had sent a new type of [[Astrali]] to live with them, even if more advanced, it was a sign of forward progress that they should celebrate. [[Asa Mistlight|Asa]], [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]], and the soft-spoken [[Kairdar Elthyra|Kairdar]] did not agree, and no matter how much they talked, the fracture of The First had begun.
+Most of [[Hypselle Aster|Hypselle's]] siblings were shocked and angered at the quick knowledge and language this supposed 'sibling' already had, when all of them and the generations following them had to spend significant time learning how to live and speak. [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]] was the most outspoken against this intruder, however both [[Hypselle Aster|Hypselle]] and [[Wiley Marius|Wiley]] were sympathetic to the new arrival. They believed that if their mother had sent a new type of [[Astrali]] to live with them, even if more advanced, it was a sign of forward progress that they should celebrate. [[Asa Mistlight|Asa]], [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]], and the soft-spoken [[Kairdar Elthyra|Kairdar]] did not agree, and no matter how much they talked, the fracture of The First had begun.
 As The First argued and [[Brutus Odumborn]] watched on, they did not realize that the meteor that had brought the new creation to their planet had sparked a deadly flame that had quickly caught on the dead grass that the summer had cursed them with, and the flame that grew became known as [[Odum's Hunt]]. Its destruction killed many unsuspecting [[Astrali]] who could not escape, and it was the spike that tore the close siblings of The First entirely in two.
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 Despite [[Hypselle Aster|Hypselle's]], [[Wiley Marius|Wiley's]], and [[Brutus Odumborn|Brutus']] efforts to stop the fire as they could while putting trust in others they did not know, [[Wiley Marius|Wiley]] did not survive the event. His death infuriated the remaining First siblings outside of [[Hypselle Aster|Hypselle]], as they could not stand to hear that [[Brutus Odumborn|Brutus]] was beginning to be revered to as a First, when he had destroyed their home and killed their brother. They refused to stand alongside the 'Odumborn Destroyer' as an equal, no matter how much he had helped in the life saving efforts of the [[Astrali]], while [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]] cursed his eldest sister for being a bleeding heart fool who did not see the destruction he brought until it was too late.
-After this, The First fractured into several groups that followed those who they trusted the most. [[Asa Mistlist|Asa]] went east toward the jungle, while [[Kairdar Elthyra|Kairdar]] and [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]] went north toward the mountains. This left the final two First who still looked at each other with kindness and vulnerability to decide to move whatever refugees they could that wanted to move from the destruction of First Landing to a better place on the other side of the Crystal Loch.
+After this, The First fractured into several groups that followed those who they trusted the most. [[Asa Mistlight|Asa]] went east toward the jungle, while [[Kairdar Elthyra|Kairdar]] and [[Hallias Yenerin|Hallias]] went north toward the mountains. This left the final two First who still looked at each other with kindness and vulnerability to decide to move whatever refugees they could that wanted to move from the destruction of First Landing to a better place on the other side of the Crystal Loch.
 Once [[Starhaven]] began to be built by the new generations of [[Astrali]] that fell after [[Odum's Hunt]], it was obvious to the three that remained together that these new Artificial [[Astrali]] would not end with [[Brutus Odumborn|Brutus]]. Their arrivals began to resemble the calmer landings that the natural [[Astrali]] had, which helped put hundreds of the refugees at ease when they realized they were just a metal verison of themselves, and soon began welcoming them into their families.